
A bright day darkens
Clouds collide and thunder strikes
Saline drops glide down
Inspired by the nature of emotions which cannot be captured in images, always.
This Haiku sums up many good days that drastically collapsed into bad ones which caused salty cheeks & a running nose for me and for many others who have been through such days. Life is funny, one moment you are celebrating and the next moment you are in a miserable state! There are way too many situations where a perfectly good day is snapped into an awful one. Do you have something similar you would like to share? Feel free to drop those thoughts in the comment section below or email me. Purgation of emotions is healthy and we all need to do it once in a while π Hope you’ll never get struck by lightning and may those tears only roll for joy!
P.S. After heavy rainfalls, there is always a crisp sunshine π #StayPositive #LifeGoesOn
What is a HAIKU?
a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world.
Note: This is my second attempt at Haiku and I hope to get better each time, feel free to be my critic π
-Zainab Attari
Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
Like an ideal haiku, it has caught a moment of life..:-) Brilliant…
Zainab Attari
This means a lot coming from someone who writes beautiful Haikus! π Thanks, Maniparna.
Roohi Bhatnagar
beautiful lines..
Zainab Attari
Thank you, Roohi! π
Ravish Mani
Profound & beautiful. Great haiku, Zainab π
Zainab Attari
Thank you very much, Ravish! π
Miss Book Thief
Beautiful. π
Zainab Attari
Thank you! π
Miss Book Thief
My pleasure. π
Mary Job
beautiful..i always want to try, i hope i will one day.
Zainab Attari
Thank you, Mary.
It’s addictive once you get started. Do let me know when you write your first Haiku.
Mary Job
i sure will…you most welcome…cheerio.